not only that i was amazed of how will composed it is, i also had great time thinking about the looks of the creatures you used and wanted to follow their stories to know what happens!! which is very cool ^o^
i gotta say these were one of the best 3 minutes i ever spent in my life

i think you'll be a super awesome writer someday, so keep 'em coming
you have a very good talent in choosing the words, and also story telling that as i said before made me want to know what's gonna happen to the creatures next ??